Her

Thoughts racing I cannot put my mind to rest, Dressed in her dress I'd undress her if I could. Her head rested on my chest, My heart beating in unrest, The cold chased away her love is my vest. Sadly she sits in sorrow, Attached to me I fill the hollow, Like glass my eyes show sin, Divinely she forgives, Once lonely I am not alone, By her alone, I am happy. In bliss, I'm made ignorant by her beauty.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/11/2016 9:10:00 AM

lovely poem

Perry Mcdaid

Date: 12/11/2014 2:15:00 AM

A poignant piece of expressed love and desire a bit confused by the second line, but striking nonetheless.

Christian Alexander

Date: 12/10/2014 9:53:00 PM

Thank you. I enjoyed reading "Her". It was very sad. I felt the pain.

Skat A

Date: 11/29/2014 11:29:00 PM

Walrus, , Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poet's around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT"

Walrus Fatty
Date: 10/19/2015 2:50:00 PM

Well, this is a bit of a late reply, but hello! Thanks for the welcome! :)

Carol Eastman

Date: 11/25/2014 1:00:00 PM

Love how you develop this to the end.Welcome to PoetrySoup. Click on an avatar or name to go to anothers poems. Leave a comment and that person will have a permanent link back to your works... Keep writing.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/24/2014 6:30:00 AM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Walrus - I choose your first great and well written free verse - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)