Her

Cute smile, lazy talk, sparkle in her eye, beauty galore  
Falling, falling….don’t tell me its u I adore
Love??? No I have no definition 
What the hell I’ll risk it, start the ignition
The darkness and mystery have me urging to explore
The hunger…I have to feed it more and more
But hold on…  
I could say I love her but am not sure I do 
We could be friends but I’d still be lacking 
Or keep quiet and let it kill me inside
Let her know and get crushed with rejection 
But…
Perfection is far from any mortal,
Correction betters any options for the next move,
I just have to prove my affection for her,
Let her feel and live in the connection that’s me and her,
That my arms are equal to fine,
That no line is drawn between us, 
And even if any it’s me protecting what is mine,
And that HER…is what I want, to change to forever MINE
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Breidenthal Avatar
November 2, 2015 at 1:23 AM
hello, James. . this is awesome... I love your style! "What the hell I’ll risk it, start the ignition" Love that line, made me smile! Always, Laura
A   Avatar
September 23, 2014 at 10:12 PM
thank you for the reply Linda
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September 20, 2014 at 1:06 PM
Hi James, this is such a deep powerful romantic piece! Excellent write! I extend a warm welcome to PoetrySoup and wish you happy writings. Pandita
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September 18, 2014 at 9:33 AM
James,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry:) Here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
Mwangi Avatar
September 18, 2014 at 3:51 PM
THANK YOU a great place to be,i already feel at home,hope i can grow and be better
Andresen Avatar
September 18, 2014 at 3:56 AM
Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,James - I choose your first great written poem - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Mwangi Avatar
September 18, 2014 at 3:52 PM
thanks for the warm welcome,
Allison Avatar
September 17, 2014 at 6:40 PM
I hope you find your forever love - its taking the plunge to admit your feelings but its the fear your feelings of love wont be returned which makes it such a hard thing to judge. Hugs jan xxx
Mwangi Avatar
September 18, 2014 at 3:53 PM
thanks i hope so too
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