Her

Happiness is my dream misery is my dreadful reality People laugh, I cry my sins are all I have God looks away Satin lends a hand My saviour is no more Every day gets darker Love got up flew away Hurt keeps me going Destruction is influence Needles are my cross My reflection is enemy I cry one last time Maybe someone will hear The voices tell me no My heart slowly beats yes Her soul is my resurrection Her kindness warms my heart Her eyes see through my wreckage Her love rebuilt my heart I have seen the light Also very bright Love perched on my shoulder Darkness detaches my head God is real She is the sign.

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Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/6/2014 6:54:00 AM

Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Jordan

Skat A

Date: 4/29/2014 1:11:00 PM

Jordan, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/24/2014 3:28:00 AM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Jordan:) - I choose your first lovely and moving written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jordan Owen

Date: 4/22/2014 5:58:00 PM

Thanks you guys for the comments and taking the time to read my stuff. It means a lot :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/22/2014 3:17:00 PM

Jordan, wow, and interesting ending... , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following and reading your poems. ~Take Care!! From: you're new poet friend ~ LINDA ~