Her

smile
wavered
a moment
until the lie
fled

betrayalsmilelanterne

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Abdulhafeez Oyewole

December 8, 2013 at 6:08 PM

Another amazing lanterne. Very nicely written!

Gary Watkins

December 10, 2013 at 9:15 PM

Thank you. These were my first attempts at lanternes. I am enjoying the form and will probably produce more at some point. Gary

Poet Destroyer A

November 27, 2013 at 1:53 AM

Gary, Thank you for spreading and sharing your kindness. I am very grateful and thankful to all who have been supportive of me one way or another. Your heartfelt words are the main attraction of who you are… Thanks for your inspiring visit. ----- Happy Thanksgiving ~ LINDA

Gary Watkins

December 10, 2013 at 9:16 PM

Wow, Linda. Nobody makes me feel better with their words and encouragement than you! It humbles me to have gained your appreciation. Much love. Gary