Her

smile wavered a moment until the lie fled

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Abdulhafeez Oyewole

Date: 12/8/2013 6:08:00 PM

Another amazing lanterne. Very nicely written!

Gary Watkins
Date: 12/10/2013 9:15:00 PM

Thank you. These were my first attempts at lanternes. I am enjoying the form and will probably produce more at some point. Gary

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/27/2013 1:53:00 AM

Gary, Thank you for spreading and sharing your kindness. I am very grateful and thankful to all who have been supportive of me one way or another. Your heartfelt words are the main attraction of who you are… Thanks for your inspiring visit. ----- Happy Thanksgiving ~ LINDA

Gary Watkins
Date: 12/10/2013 9:16:00 PM

Wow, Linda. Nobody makes me feel better with their words and encouragement than you! It humbles me to have gained your appreciation. Much love. Gary

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/24/2013 10:19:00 AM

Gary, makes me wonder what the lie is! Like the intense imagery.... nice lanterne... LINDA

Gary Watkins
Date: 11/24/2013 11:40:00 AM

Wonder away. - Gary