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Old pallid lady seen here, frail from cold, snow-slicked roads, sluggish old woman, a young guy, stopped, whispered, I'll lend a safe fist, life is an unwinnable battle? guide the trembling feet, and was proud of his strength and greet.
Written: July 24, 2022 Short verse inspired by pictures Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Lisa YY Link C 40 Words

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Date: 8/10/2022 4:16:00 AM
"life is an unwinnable battle?" - Indeed, a thought-provoking question. Congratulations!
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Date: 7/24/2022 8:33:00 AM
This is so sweet, my friend
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Date: 7/24/2022 9:30:00 AM
Thank you very much, Andrea. I'm pleased you enjoyed it, hope you are keeping well and have a good weekend.

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