Help Me Please

hollow me....completely hollow............
not having light on my path ....depressed root less falling apart.......
tried so much to bear every weight ..
but not able to stand and see the light for far......
i know its a small time as every day this night will also have have its end
but afraid of my finising strenght ......
this night may finish with my death......
i m doomed broken peace of heart...
not able stand make my self correct......
feeling like standing in mid......
and every aim of me just making me falling in.......
my sky my land every inch of my glad.....
teared and abraid not able to collect and make it again.....
my words my friends my dairy and my parents.....
feeling missing you, need you to hold me agianst....
this storm i m feeling cant able to stand............
wanted to live more .....but cant see the path any more......
i never ask for help to you all...
but this time i cant swim at all.....
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A   Avatar
February 19, 2016 at 9:32 PM
a heartfelt poem. LINDA
Tanwar Avatar
December 17, 2016 at 11:09 AM
thanks ya
Henderson Avatar
February 5, 2016 at 7:43 AM
Let me lighten the load. Take my hand I offer peace and blessings my friend.
Tanwar Avatar
February 5, 2016 at 9:10 AM
thank you....
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