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Note: Just a poem, contemplative about life and death

Die

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Sara Ella

Date: 11/11/2017 3:57:00 PM

Hello Art - This is quite the poem! So many ways to interpret it. Hope you are well! <3

Tim Smith

Date: 11/11/2017 8:48:00 AM

This has many interpretations...I would die for a breakfast casserole right now.

Agnes Krampe

Date: 11/11/2017 6:44:00 AM

Everything ok, Arthur? It is remarkable how much thought and emotion three short words of a total of nine letters can evoke. Minimalist poetry at its best.

Russell Sivey

Date: 11/11/2017 5:14:00 AM

Such a strong emotion that is stirred from such a short word as this...so many things can be construed from this amazing word! You have expressed what you wanted expertly by this alarming poem! You must be cautious when you read something like this...suicide is one thing that comes to my mind when I read this, including the title it seems to be a factor! What an ingenious piece my friend, Great Work Arthur!!

Eileen Manassian

Date: 11/11/2017 12:47:00 AM

Only one in the depth of excruciating pain could make such a request, and only one in the inexorable grip of love could answer it. I'm moved...

Eve Roper

Date: 11/11/2017 12:13:00 AM

=_=, no live

Akkina Downing

Date: 11/10/2017 10:31:00 PM

Phew... You got me worried for a sec, till I saw your note... Lol!