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Help Is On the Way

Help is on the way Although it seems like forever Help is on the way Now or never I wonder where they are Help is on the way And they couldn't be far Gladly I was with a smile Help is on the way Although I thought it would take a while Here they are to rescue me Help is on the way I thought I'd never see Now I'm happy to be free Help is on the way And I didn't believe that it would be It's a good feeling to be alive Help is on the way And I thought that I would die

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John Freeman

Date: 10/13/2009 12:11:00 PM

An amazing story in this poem, is it bio? Sincerely, Love, Moses

Audrey Haick

Date: 10/9/2009 5:56:00 PM

Hey Danielle, Thank you for commenting on my poem! I just read one of yours and I enjoyed it also. I plan to read more. This reminds me to never give up. Thank you for sharing this especially at this time. Peace, Audrey (Ladybug12

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/7/2009 4:15:00 AM

Thank you Donielle for sharing your heart with us today. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors and in life. Keep writing it helps. Love, Carol

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 10/6/2009 12:29:00 PM

Welcome to the soup, thanks for your comments on my work. I realy like this poem, we all feel that way at times.