Rockman Pritts Poet Rhyme

Help From Above

Starlight. Star bright
First star I see tonight
Science says you're not a star
They say your light is planet Mars

But can't I still just make a wish?
A simple plea. A small request
All I want is one true love
A gift of light from up above

Rockman  :-)

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Karen Anglesey October 18, 2013 at 12:17 AM Simply stated with sweet emotion.

Kathryn Collins September 15, 2013 at 4:23 PM love it Rockman. - Venus, Mars, firefly jars, I wish on everything. love, Kathy

Danesh Morgan August 31, 2013 at 1:54 AM you rocks man

Eileen Manassian August 20, 2013 at 2:53 AM How delightful! :) Go ahead and wish! Thanks ever so much for your thoughtful comment on my poem, My Jiggly Bits! I appreciated your visit to my work!

Christine Phillips August 17, 2013 at 7:43 PM Nice little poem. I can hear a child's voice in this piece. Lovely.

Cecilia Macfarlane August 17, 2013 at 1:48 PM Aw....this is so sweet!

Andrea Dietrich August 16, 2013 at 10:01 PM ahhhh, it is short and sweet and the last part of it is so precious. That was a touching ending for me. And what a coincidence. I was working tonight on a contest poem called StarShine!!! But probably won't post it right away. Thanks for letting me know you finally got a new post up. Randy??