Help From Above!

Help From Above!


there once was a Man from Rangoon
who gorged 'till he he resembled a balloon
between bites he did spy
his personal trainer from the sky
with results-  made the ladies swoon!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Kendrick Avatar
June 6, 2010 at 6:09 PM
Now I need that trainer to get me motivated..Keep the creative pen flowing...Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work...Sara
Peranteau Avatar
June 2, 2010 at 5:12 PM
Great limerick Mr. Goff ! A fat wallet, a full belly and someone warm to twist up with every night ! A mans dream Sir ! james
Guzzi Avatar
June 1, 2010 at 4:22 PM
Naw I didn't remember Jamie..I only new you needed a "pick me up" ;) smooch
Guzzi Avatar
June 1, 2010 at 2:28 PM
Get your Catch Phrase Quick they're almost all gone..Contest! ....read my Sunset Warrior..about a barrel chested man
Strand Avatar
May 29, 2010 at 12:33 AM
Re your blog comment Jim I hope to bring out a sequel later in the year.Will keep you posted.Rgds Brian
Guzzi Avatar
May 26, 2010 at 8:16 AM
LOL....yup that's what we all need "re-engineering?" Jamie dear please write to one of my lovely Eve's...no one is courting them? Sent your concept of Adam relating to Eve into Linda Maries contest! Please....with sugar?
Mehta Avatar
May 23, 2010 at 2:51 AM
Very interesting and humorous Read mine for a diagnose
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