Notes About The Poem

I think when one brother falls in love with someone mom does not approve of, it is a nice gesture for the brother to fall in love with another species, which makes it more difficult for the family to disapprove fo the first son's choice.

Help From a Brother

her honorable son
                         fell in love with geisha girl
                     number two son helped brother
                              fell in love with bee
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Kiser Avatar
December 2, 2018 at 8:30 PM
Now there's an idea; I agree.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 29, 2018 at 10:06 AM
Too funny! I really like this one!
Krutsinger Avatar
November 29, 2018 at 1:56 PM
I thought "what would he like to fall in love with?" think how prickly this might make the mother.
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