Help From a Brother

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I think when one brother falls in love with someone mom does not approve of, it is a nice gesture for the brother to fall in love with another species, which makes it more difficult for the family to disapprove fo the first son's choice.

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M. L. Kiser

Date: 12/2/2018 8:30:00 PM

Now there's an idea; I agree.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/29/2018 10:06:00 AM

Too funny! I really like this one!

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 11/29/2018 1:56:00 PM

I thought "what would he like to fall in love with?" think how prickly this might make the mother.