Tallan Bent Poet Lyric

Help Family, Help Family

Help Family, Help Family


Work hard coz I want real Money so I can help my mummy coz mummy help me when I 
didn’t have money.. And mummy was the one who told me ‘‘SAVE for a rainy day’’.. So now 
I got a double umbrella so if it rains it doesn’t poor, coz its not about being poor in Today’s 
times coz they don’t help the poor and its so much harder to help yourself.. 
So I help Mummy and not only with money so 
mummy can help herself, Daddy, Sis and Bro.
So Daddy can help himself, Mummy, Sis and Bro.
So Sis and Bro can help themselves, Mum, Dad and Me.
So help your Family help Family because you’re a ……!!!!!

By Tallan J Bent
23:23Hrs 17/05/08.

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Margaret Okubo January 1, 2009 at 8:00 AM Very cute verse with a profound message.Congrats on being featured.

Sharon Winter December 29, 2008 at 9:59 AM Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week! Warmest wishes for a safe and happy new year! Love, Shar

Michael Jordan December 29, 2008 at 9:19 AM Tallan - Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – I hope the coming year has many blessings in store for you and those you love – God Bless, MJ

Sue Mason December 28, 2008 at 6:58 PM Very clever write here Tallan and a well-deserved selection to be a feature this week here at the Soup!! Congratulations!

Vince Suzadail Jr. December 28, 2008 at 4:49 PM Congrats Tallan on your lyric being featured. Vince

December 28, 2008 at 4:35 PM The interesting use of language to convey your thoughts. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Keep on writing. Karen

Carrie Richards December 28, 2008 at 3:44 PM Helping is the right thing, as much as we can. Well deserved poem to be featured this week! Congratulations! ~ Carrie

Abraham L December 27, 2008 at 2:38 AM A great poem, well put together, we need to help our family, especially if we are in the position too. good work

Joseph Spence Sr September 18, 2008 at 3:11 PM I like the message in this poem of family helping family. The theme is right on target. I like your point about saving for a rainy day. That's excellent. Great job! ~Joseph

Michael Jordan September 8, 2008 at 5:41 AM I reckon the truth in this poem is a truth that desperately needs to be heard - God Bless