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What if we forget a few luxuries*** so we could afford to share and provide food to those hungry child ? Their tear make me feel sad ...
It is a long journey
Between
Human Being and Being Human
Let us travel at least one step daily
To cover the distance
And help the ones in need.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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April 26, 2015 at 8:33 PM
thank you for the reply
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April 4, 2015 at 8:04 PM
ASHIQ, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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April 16, 2015 at 4:53 AM
Hello skat :) hugs :) , Thanks #skat for your nice complement.... i will try to be with all , just need support and inspiring from all of u my sweet friends :) , I am ashiq from bangladesh.like to read and write good inspiring lines...hope you will reply :)
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March 30, 2015 at 3:25 AM
Powerful thought. This is a strong statement. You have a message well worth writing. One suggestion--perhaps look for less common adjectives--this will make a stronger and more memorable statement. (for example: FAMISHED instead of hungry....DESOLATE instead of sad....) Thanks for sharing this with your readers. Victoria
Alam Avatar
April 16, 2015 at 4:55 AM
thanks a lot friend victoria ... i like to inspire people ... im glad having ur suggesion :)
A   Avatar
March 29, 2015 at 10:47 AM
Ashiq, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends @-> LINDA <-@
Alam Avatar
April 16, 2015 at 5:38 AM
Thanks an ocean :) wish u a blessed year 2015 :)
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March 29, 2015 at 9:04 AM
- A small greeting and warm welcome, Ashiq :) - Thank you for choosing to share your poems here at the P- Soup - Looking forward to read many poems from you in the future - // Anne-Lise :)
Alam Avatar
April 16, 2015 at 5:34 AM
thanks :)
Turner Avatar
March 28, 2015 at 8:30 PM
Thank you for this beautiful poem you most be a good person to write so lonely. #7
Alam Avatar
April 16, 2015 at 5:36 AM
thanks , you are also a good friend :)
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