Tim Smith Poet Personification

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I knew this day would come
When I'd lose you from my sight
I won't be able to devour you
I'll miss that scrumptious bite

Seems everyday you were there for me
You were my afternoon delight
So rich, nutty, and delicious
I should have held you tight

I feel so down without you
My senses are getting numb
You gave me such a pick me up
To your pleasure I'd succumb

I see you through the window
With my sad and longing eyes
I crave just one taste of you
Can't you hear my heartfelt cries

This machine wont take my quarters
I've tried again and again
I need you, my snickers bar
Anyone got change for a ten

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Skat A April 30, 2015 at 7:03 PM AWESOME TIM. Congratulations on your well-deserved win. SKAT love

Poet Destroyer A April 25, 2015 at 11:33 PM Hi Tim, Congratulations on your Humorous Poetry contest win :) LINDA

Robert Lindley April 22, 2015 at 9:33 PM Congratulations on a great win my friend. Got to have my snickers bar... lol

Kp Nunez April 22, 2015 at 1:59 PM LOL! I bet Snickers people paid you to write this poem...:) Congrats!

Eve Roper April 21, 2015 at 11:35 PM Tim, I love this humorous write, caffeine attack or chocolate :) a 7 and congratulations on your wonderful win

Doris Jamoner October 17, 2014 at 12:36 PM For Love speaks out so quietly In the need to share. Tim Smith October 17, 2014 at 1:22 PM Okay....I'm always sleepy...hugs Tim Doris Jamoner October 17, 2014 at 12:41 PM -____- sorry I wrote the comment above in a wrong place.. I just want and suppose to say Congratz u deserve to win but I wrote something else kinda sleepy hehe! Congratz again!

Maurice Yvonne October 16, 2014 at 7:04 PM CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR FIRST PLACE WIN.

Kayod5 Kayode October 16, 2014 at 9:05 AM Another hit Tim,congrats.

Dr.Ram Mehta October 16, 2014 at 6:00 AM Nice personification, Tim, congrats on the win

Jan Allison October 16, 2014 at 4:20 AM oh I remember the banter we had with this one lol many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx

Judy Konos October 15, 2014 at 11:53 PM No bad writers in this contest! You were fast, furious, humorous, romantic,lost, found, sought after, wondrous! THANKS FOR ENTERING! I'M HAPPY!

Brenda Meier-Hans October 15, 2014 at 11:40 PM Congratulations on your win Tim. Number 1. Love it.

Shadow Hamilton October 12, 2014 at 2:53 PM lmcso so hilarious Tim you have excelled hugs Tim Smith October 12, 2014 at 2:58 PM Thank you my dear. I was in a playful mood.....hugs Tim

Charmaine Chircop October 10, 2014 at 2:14 PM Who can refuse a snicker bar? : ).You put a smile on my face Tim. Tim Smith October 10, 2014 at 2:21 PM lol....Not I....that I admit freely....luckily I walk 2 miles to work from the train each day :) hugs Tim

Maurice Yvonne October 10, 2014 at 12:59 PM Just dropped in to sprinkle rainbow bright happies. Tim Smith October 10, 2014 at 1:12 PM I'll take some....happy Friday :)

Liam Mcdaid October 10, 2014 at 12:02 PM tasty thoughts tim smiling Tim Smith October 10, 2014 at 12:11 PM Thanks liam...it is a fun piece....cheers

Dorian Petersen Potter October 10, 2014 at 5:55 AM So you went cold turkey without chocolate ah, poor baby Tim. Feel so bad for you my friend that must have been a very horrible experience. Poor you! Poor baby! Want some milk? A cow? What about a baby bottle or pacifier? sorry..... I got no chocolate machine to ship you one...Lol. ;) Hahaha ..lol..lol.. Excellent write! Very funny! You got me grinning a lot here and acting silly too. Love your poem! I give you a 7! Hugs! ;) Love peace and light! xxx D. Tim Smith October 10, 2014 at 6:18 AM That's okay I went to the store after work and bought two :)....hugs Tim

Andrea Dietrich October 9, 2014 at 9:15 PM I just knew it was food you were talking about!! Snickers is the name of our new puppy dog!!! So the poem could be about him too. hahaha (he has the coloring of Snickers bar) Tim Smith October 9, 2014 at 9:17 PM That is funny and a cute name...hugs to all

Maurice Yvonne October 9, 2014 at 4:07 PM This one made me Snicker, and here you are empty handed, ain't that just the way life be. It so hard to stare at a candy bar and no pocket change. Loved the write and the twist and like everybody else craving chocolate. Maybe the candy bar companies should pay you for this poem. Tim Smith October 9, 2014 at 4:11 PM At least free candy...I am their best customer :)

Sebastian Aaron Baez October 9, 2014 at 12:22 PM LOL. I got two fives, oh wait you need singles. This is funny and awesome, nice work Tim! Tim Smith October 9, 2014 at 12:26 PM LOL...thank you my friend....cheers

Anne-Lise Andresen October 9, 2014 at 11:41 AM - I must admit ...... I love chocolate !!! - Enjoy reading, Tim :)) - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Tim Smith October 9, 2014 at 11:57 AM Thanks A-L...I do as well...hugs Tim

Jan Allison October 9, 2014 at 9:48 AM If you were closer you could have had one of mine - I've still got 2 Snickers left in the fridge :-) hugs Jan xxx Maurice Yvonne October 9, 2014 at 7:07 PM Pretentious? Moi? Jan Allison October 9, 2014 at 6:47 PM of course we are talking chocolate that's what the poem is about - innuendo moi no way! hugs jan xx Maurice Yvonne October 9, 2014 at 6:40 PM I'm lost are we still talking about chocolate bars. You don't have to be Felini to read in some undercurrent of sexual innuendos once somebody is putting his snicker bar in somebody else lunchbox. Jan Allison October 9, 2014 at 6:34 PM Oh I thought you would have fun size at least Maurice - they are great for a lunchbox:-) hugs Jan x Maurice Yvonne October 9, 2014 at 6:29 PM Oh thanks a lot Jan talk about ganging up on the new guy. Mine is bite size and Tim is Kingsize. Besides it's not true, it's just that I just got out of the pool. Jan Allison October 9, 2014 at 6:19 PM ha ha ha Tim that made me giggle I bet you have a kingsize one:-) hugs Jan xx Tim Smith October 9, 2014 at 6:17 PM Lol...I'm here now....any nibble will do....do you still have bite size Maurice? Jan Allison October 9, 2014 at 6:10 PM cos Tim isn't here to defend himself Maurice:-) hugs jan xxx Maurice Yvonne October 9, 2014 at 6:07 PM and why are you looking at me Jan when you say LITTLE nibble. Jan Allison October 9, 2014 at 5:50 PM Sometimes I just fancy a little nibble Maurice:-) Jan x

Casarah Nance October 9, 2014 at 8:54 AM MMMM. I want some chocolate now, I'm surprised they haven't made vending machines that take credit cards. This made me smile this morning sweetie, the humor is needed on a chilly october morning, :) Maurice Yvonne October 9, 2014 at 6:34 PM Where are you Cas? I'm getting killed just above you. Tim and Jan are ganging up on me. They're making fun of the size of my Snicker Bar. Jan Allison October 9, 2014 at 9:47 AM Pah Mr Smith - behave - U need U in humour! hugs jan xxx Tim Smith October 9, 2014 at 9:18 AM btw...you spelled humor right...not that fancy way Jan does :) Tim Smith October 9, 2014 at 8:57 AM lol...I'm heading to the store to get some :) hugs Tim