Help

In this small pool of loneliness
I’m trying to escape from the ghost of darkness
I need an angel who’ll help me out from this cage
I don’t want to lose myself
Cause of any carelessness
I may drown I may die
I will miss you
Speaking all truth it isn’t a lie
You can be my life jacket
If you save me; we can share a big “lays” packet
Only if I survive
We can see together a bee hive
If no one comes to me
There isn’t an ounce for me to be alive
My legs are moving down
The ghost of darkness is seeing me with a frown
Help me someone before I get down!

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Beata Agustin

July 18, 2024 at 11:48 PM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A

February 20, 2016 at 1:45 PM

zoya, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA

Skat A

December 20, 2015 at 1:54 PM

ZOYA, stopped by to enjoy some of the best poems and poets of 2010 - 1015 :) Hope you are well enjoying what is left of 2015. Sending an early Christmas Message with Hugs. May you have a blessed Christmas and a happy New Year. Good luck in all you do during 2016. ~SKAT LOVE~