Help

In this small pool of loneliness I’m trying to escape from the ghost of darkness I need an angel who’ll help me out from this cage I don’t want to lose myself Cause of any carelessness I may drown I may die I will miss you Speaking all truth it isn’t a lie You can be my life jacket If you save me; we can share a big “lays” packet Only if I survive We can see together a bee hive If no one comes to me There isn’t an ounce for me to be alive My legs are moving down The ghost of darkness is seeing me with a frown Help me someone before I get down!

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Beata Agustin

Date: 7/18/2024 11:48:00 PM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/20/2016 1:45:00 PM

zoya, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA

Skat A

Date: 12/20/2015 1:54:00 PM

ZOYA, stopped by to enjoy some of the best poems and poets of 2010 - 1015 :) Hope you are well enjoying what is left of 2015. Sending an early Christmas Message with Hugs. May you have a blessed Christmas and a happy New Year. Good luck in all you do during 2016. ~SKAT LOVE~

Eleza Young

Date: 7/21/2013 1:32:00 AM

Misery expressed in such a lovely way. my fav part was the lays packet one:P ..... well anyhow loved it:)