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Help me God, I used to wonder close to the light not letting it out of sight. I just fell even though I tried with all my might. I know all you do and see is unjudgemental and uncrude but still my actions and stunning guilt has left me in no shape to be seen, in no light. I'am lost, my life full of burdens and heart-aches and honestly I have a minor headache. I need to rest, I needa safe haven to land my broken spirit. I feel alone in a crowd of many people, I feel as though, even as I'am screaming louder...no one is listening or cares to help all the while I swiftly fade into a skeleton of raw scars and open wounds. I spend my days in agony wishing to be saved from the wreckage of many pieces and still I search for the closure that I long for out and beyond the Blood-red horizon.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/4/2016 12:26:00 AM
Amanda Bowen, you've expressed yourself well, I enjoyed your poem. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry XOX ~LINDA~
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Date: 8/19/2015 12:42:00 AM
AMANDA, I like this very much SKAT
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Date: 8/11/2011 8:04:00 AM
Today I have stopped back to read more of your excellent poetry Amanda. I will be back again soon and hope to see some more poetry written here by you. If you feel it in your heart then write it as that is where the best poetry comes from. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/1/2011 10:55:00 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup... so enjoyed reading your creative poetry... enjoy the site with its many features as u continue to share words with luv..
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Date: 8/1/2011 8:04:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Amanda. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Date: 8/1/2011 12:21:00 AM
GREAT POEM KEEP EM COMMING
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Date: 7/31/2011 11:41:00 PM
WOw welcome to the soup Amanda with this powerful piece. God never leave us. it is us that tends to go off track. God bless and keep writing
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Date: 7/31/2011 10:02:00 PM
welcome to the soup! feel free to scream or vent your emotions through poetry to us. many of us will listen :)
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Date: 7/31/2011 9:13:00 PM
Very thought provoking expressions, Amanda
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Date: 7/31/2011 3:01:00 PM
needa is actually need a
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