Help!!!!!!

Upon the sheen a shine is shone
In the glen, the glow is gone

In places, picking and poking fun
At races, the rockin, rollin run

Sits the dark, in dank despair
Blows the breeze, begone, beware

Chewing cud a curdled cow
Mews the monkey a cat’s meow

Grooks and Geese agree to grow
Short and shorter by saying so

The rain, the rhyme the rolling pin
Here and there and back again

Nonsense nestled noggin wise
Brain is baked, lobotomized

© Jul 5 2010 For Deb's "Anything Goes" contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Smith-Johnsen Avatar
July 13, 2010 at 3:59 AM
LOL. Are you poking fun, Charles? I did laugh at the unexpected ending. Congratulations on placing in the “Anything Goes!” contest sponsored by: Deborah Guzzi with this FUN poem. Enjoy your glory! Smiles, Dane Ann
Arteaga Avatar
July 9, 2010 at 9:11 PM
great, congrats!
Brown Avatar
July 9, 2010 at 11:27 AM
Congratulations Charles on your win in Deborah Guzzi's contest "Anything Goes" Love, Carol
George   Avatar
July 8, 2010 at 5:12 AM
Congratulaions on your win, Charles, wth this very inventive, creative write. Lainie
Sweetheart Avatar
July 7, 2010 at 7:08 PM
Congrats Charles on your big win in the Anything Goes contest.. enjoy... wit luv from the sweetheart"
Culverhouse Avatar
July 5, 2010 at 5:46 PM
witty poem, enjoyed!!
Palli Avatar
July 5, 2010 at 3:45 PM
I enjoyed that!
Palhegyi Avatar
July 5, 2010 at 11:41 AM
I like this style. I enjoyed reading this.
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