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Beatles Song - Help!   

Help!

Help! I dropped my phone down the loo
What can be done? what shall I do?
Stick my hand deep into the pan
I pull and tug the best I can
Call a plumber or call a friend?
Can't do that, phone's stuck in the bend
Out I go to buy a new phone 
Call a plumber when I get home.
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Date: 7/2/2025 11:44:00 AM
Hello Emilia James, yes call the plumber when you get home. A good idea. Hugs. /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/3/2025 12:01:00 PM
Hello Emilia James, It ois nice to see you. Dropping things not always in the loo, I will read your poetry more often. Enjoy your day my cfrind. /Darlene/
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Emilia James
Date: 7/3/2025 10:47:00 AM
Hello Darlene. Lovely to see you. Im always dropping things, not always down the loo though thankfully. Emilia : )
Date: 6/27/2025 7:38:00 PM
Back with an afterthought. It's a wonderful thing that you can turn an unfortunate situation like this into prime contender poem!
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Emilia James
Date: 6/30/2025 1:09:00 PM
Thank you David, that is a lovely thing to say. I was going to do Strawberry Fields but ate some strawberries instead lol. Emilia : )
Date: 6/26/2025 9:05:00 PM
Cleverly done, Emilia. I really like this
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Emilia James
Date: 6/27/2025 1:02:00 PM
Thank you so much Andrea. I appreciate you saying that. Emilia : )
Date: 6/26/2025 8:38:00 PM
Priorities, of course, Emilia. Good to know you've got your head screwed on right. LOL. ~ gw
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Emilia James
Date: 6/27/2025 1:00:00 PM
Exactly Gershon. I knew you would get it and there's not that many that say my head is screwed on right either, so thank you lol. Emilia : )
Date: 6/26/2025 10:29:00 AM
Haha pretty funny, though not so funny for a friend of mine when it happened to him -lol.
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Emilia James
Date: 6/27/2025 12:46:00 PM
Thanks David, It can turn out to be an expensive accident. Have myself ruined two phones doing the same thing. Emilia : )
Date: 6/25/2025 1:58:00 PM
What a creative/fun "Help" write/loo story. You sure do need help. Thanks for the laugh. "Good Luck" Have a fun day writing away...............
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Emilia James
Date: 6/27/2025 12:41:00 PM
Thank you Paula. I have been told that many times before for some strange reason lol. Happy it made you laugh too. Emilia : )
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