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Beatles Song - Help!

Help! I dropped my phone down the loo What can be done? what shall I do? Stick my hand deep into the pan I pull and tug the best I can Call a plumber or call a friend? Can't do that, phone's stuck in the bend Out I go to buy a new phone Call a plumber when I get home.

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David Crandall

Date: 6/27/2025 7:38:00 PM

Back with an afterthought. It's a wonderful thing that you can turn an unfortunate situation like this into prime contender poem!

Emilia James
Date: 6/30/2025 1:09:00 PM

Thank you David, that is a lovely thing to say. I was going to do Strawberry Fields but ate some strawberries instead lol. Emilia : )

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/26/2025 9:05:00 PM

Cleverly done, Emilia. I really like this

Emilia James
Date: 6/27/2025 1:02:00 PM

Thank you so much Andrea. I appreciate you saying that. Emilia : )

Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/26/2025 8:38:00 PM

Priorities, of course, Emilia. Good to know you've got your head screwed on right. LOL. ~ gw

Emilia James
Date: 6/27/2025 1:00:00 PM

Exactly Gershon. I knew you would get it and there's not that many that say my head is screwed on right either, so thank you lol. Emilia : )

David Crandall

Date: 6/26/2025 10:29:00 AM

Haha pretty funny, though not so funny for a friend of mine when it happened to him -lol.

Emilia James
Date: 6/27/2025 12:46:00 PM

Thanks David, It can turn out to be an expensive accident. Have myself ruined two phones doing the same thing. Emilia : )

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/25/2025 1:58:00 PM

What a creative/fun "Help" write/loo story. You sure do need help. Thanks for the laugh. "Good Luck" Have a fun day writing away...............

Emilia James
Date: 6/27/2025 12:41:00 PM

Thank you Paula. I have been told that many times before for some strange reason lol. Happy it made you laugh too. Emilia : )