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Hell's inferno No Exit

Dradogorus the fire spitting dragon Guard Dogs of hell impatiently awaits to raps their tongue, sink their fangs and fling thieves, adulterers wife beaters and dictators into these bottomless pits. Here you'll stays and rots into the fiery pulp flowing down and down these molten rivers of no return. 11/1/2015 © A. JUman - The "said" Poet Type In (A. Juman) For A relaxing and astonishing moment with all my POEMS

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Date: 3/17/2016 6:08:00 PM
I applaud you with this topic, despite the Bible's warnings concerning hell, more and more Christians don't like or refuse to talk about it.
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Date: 11/23/2015 4:55:00 AM
Hi...firstly thank you for reading and commenting on my poem- a tale of a bad boy... Really liked this poem of yours... U have a strong imagination...gud luck!!
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Date: 11/9/2015 12:53:00 PM
Hi, firstly thanks for your kind comment on my poem The Rag Trade; glad you liked it. Regards this poem as a Christian there are many who will go to hell; a real place of total torment and separation from God who is Love. No need to fear this place though if you believe in Jesus and He is your Lord..all is well and all will be well. We all have choices to make and some will agree with me and some won't. That's fine and how it should be. Kind regards Edward
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Date: 11/9/2015 1:26:00 PM
Much obliged for you visit Edward. Thanks a million and do come back
Date: 11/9/2015 11:42:00 AM
This one is very in the moment. I enjoyed the caustic nature, very revealing.
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Date: 11/9/2015 12:09:00 PM
Very glad you enjoyed my friend--Tell you the truth I stop looking at it because it scares me. but do come back check out the others
Date: 11/8/2015 12:19:00 PM
Very Good poem but I don't believe in place of no return. But sadly some people do deserve exactly that. Still I do believe everyone can change.
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Date: 11/9/2015 12:10:00 PM
Patryc thanks for stopping by I really do appreciate-- this was just metaphorically speaking. Believe me it frightened me too. I stop looking at it because chills runs through my bones thinking if this could be true then I be one of its inhabitants
Date: 11/8/2015 8:12:00 AM
Great, I liked the poem very much. We may all are in trap struggling to escape; but I know, one day our struggle will be ceased.
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Date: 11/8/2015 9:21:00 AM
Thanks Su Ben glad you like it. tell you the truth it scares the dickens out of me
Date: 11/6/2015 8:40:00 AM
Your words took stage and treated the reader to a glimpse of your imagination. Emile.
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Date: 11/6/2015 9:10:00 AM
Thanks a million Emile I do appreciate that
Date: 11/5/2015 11:27:00 PM
Eerie but deep...... Your works pulsate with a message that refuses to die...
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Date: 11/6/2015 3:24:00 AM
Thanks A million-- Teddy-- I appreciate that
Date: 11/5/2015 7:21:00 PM
A well descriptive write you have penned. Welcome to poetry soup A. Zaladin. I enjoyed the read~ Caryl
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Date: 11/5/2015 7:32:00 PM
thank you for reading --I do appreciate