Hello, Yes First Smile

Hello why are you coming here
You called me for smile.
Tell me yours works
No first smile, yes little bit
Without you, I can’t live smile.

Please cooperate with me, smile
You enjoying lovely night
May every effort be rewarded with success
My happiness is cooperation smile.

You stop your worry, start new jokes
With me, for a new happiness thought
Lord send a holy star to Bethlehem made this
Globe filled with prosperity come true
New year wish for the best Christmas smile.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2007

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Agustin Avatar
September 13, 2024 at 2:25 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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February 21, 2016 at 4:13 PM
Mr.ALOK PATNAIK, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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December 27, 2015 at 3:49 PM
MR A, a pleasure to read :) hope you are enjoying the holidays ...... SKAT LOVE
Brown Avatar
July 7, 2011 at 11:41 AM
What more could I ask for today? It is a beautiful day the sun shining and birds singing. Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry with us Mr. Alok. Love, Carol
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