Hello Turns Crazy

Her “Hello”  that was so sweet
had an alluring spark in its greet,
his heart leaps to grab this treat
to seal the two souls with its heat.

She who was once his fond princess
Gets in no time his harsh dismiss,
Now with a twist “Hello, what is all this,
What did I miss to call thee my bliss”.?

His cries “Hello, can anyone help me,
The honey that I got attracted to as bee
Needs only my money to show her glee”,
has a response “Hello, nothing comes free”.
Trapped in, he brings out his plea to flee.


15-Jan-2018
Hello Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Silent One
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Andresen Avatar
January 20, 2019 at 1:28 PM
- Hello, Sathya :) - Congratulations on your winning poem - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Roper Avatar
January 20, 2019 at 12:43 PM
Congratulations on your win, Sathya, on Silent One's "Hello" contest! Hugs Eve ~`*
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January 20, 2019 at 7:18 AM
Nice take on the contest Sathya.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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