Hello To January

Goodbye cloud that
Once held grip,
Out of your arms
Forever.
I have the plan
You cannot take
Away.
I thought I needed
you.
I don't, so bye.
And Hello!
My new friend
Hope.
Tomorrow. 
My wings are spread.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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January 28, 2014 at 11:37 AM
i love it... SKAT
Bennett Avatar
January 28, 2014 at 11:58 AM
Thanks Skat!
Mehta Avatar
January 21, 2014 at 9:02 AM
Enjoyed your expressions on January and congrats on the win, Alexis
Bennett Avatar
January 24, 2014 at 7:56 AM
Thank you so much Dr. Ram Mehta. I'll have to stop by your page sometime. :-)
Andresen Avatar
January 20, 2014 at 2:26 PM
- Hello January, contest is judged / / Sponsored by: Vicky Tsiluma - Congratulations on your winning poem, Alexis - Nice to take part - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Bennett Avatar
January 20, 2014 at 9:13 PM
Thanks Anne-Lise. I was so excited to see that I placed. Even if it was 13th. This made my day completely!! Thanks so much. :-)
Tsiluma Avatar
January 20, 2014 at 8:53 AM
Beautiful poem Alexis! It's always good to shake off that which weighs us down and embrace that which will help us in our quest. Very well written!
Bennett Avatar
January 20, 2014 at 10:48 AM
Thanks Vicky. I appreciate your visit. I'll have to stop by and read some of your poems. :-)
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