Malabika Ray Choudhury Poet Haiku

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Hello Spring

slice of sun unchains
                             cascading blue waterfall
                                teals glide in deep lake



                                      March 2, 2022
            For H Forms - Traditional Nature Haiku Poetry Contest
                           Sponsor: Constance La France
                    Syllables (5-7-5) checked by HMS.com

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Andrea Dietrich March 11, 2022 at 4:38 PM Back with my congrats. Your imagery truly was splendid here. Malabika Ray Choudhury March 11, 2022 at 5:26 PM Thanks, Andrea. Your lovely compliment means so much.

Constance La France March 8, 2022 at 8:36 AM Mala, congratulations on your win in my Nature Haiku contest with your poem ~Constance Malabika Ray Choudhury March 11, 2022 at 5:25 PM Thanks, Constance. I feel honoured.

Andrea Dietrich March 6, 2022 at 11:45 AM gorgeous, Mala!!

JC Brul March 3, 2022 at 5:45 AM A stunning Haiku is painted in vivid imagery. Best wishes for the win.

Krish Radhakrishna March 3, 2022 at 1:15 AM very nice haiku and a photo to go with it! well done, Mala! Malabika Ray Choudhury March 3, 2022 at 5:37 AM Thank you, Krish. your dropping in on my page is a delight.

Joanna Daniel March 2, 2022 at 11:52 PM Now this is a haiku, excellent one, Mala:) Malabika Ray Choudhury March 3, 2022 at 5:38 AM Thanks, Jo. really appreciate your inspiring comment.