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Hello My Love

The rocky bridge spanned over the widest part of the river Allowing the torrid waters to eagerly flow along with a true force While afternoon sun smiled through the overhead covering branches I had made my way upon the bridge to meet her and take her in my arms There she was, as promised, she’d be waiting, wearing that blouse I had given her for the pleasure of giving her, the color was perfect for her She smiled upon me and suddenly the sunlight was lost, as her light shone stronger I got close enough to smell the perfume that incites desires, reaching her, we kissed hello

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 10/22/2008 7:34:00 AM
Dear Michael: I just posted Lovingly, and just wrote it on the bus to the Mall library. Funny, how we're on-line at teh same time. Good karma. Romantic poem, I really like it. Thanks for reading my poems. Glad you liked them. Much Love, Janice Herzog xoxo
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Date: 10/21/2008 2:02:00 PM
Wonderfully romantic write. I always find bridges so appealing and inspiring. Best, Nigel
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