Carolyne Lloyd-Hartley Poet Rhyme

Hello Mr Hare

A glance toward the window
A hare, I stare, he stares
A moment we share
He ran 
A passing glimpse

I hoover like the good wife does
A shadow I do spy
He's there, that hare, right there
I try not to care
He ran 
A passing glimpse

Sweep away the endless leaves
A rustle jolts my eyes
You there, brown hare, we stare
I try not to scare
He ran 
A passing glimpse

I sit and wait I barely breath
The sight amazes me
My hare, his hare, a pair
Of I they were aware
They ran
More than a  passing glimpse

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Poet Destroyer A April 24, 2010 at 4:37 AM sounds romantic the way you wrote this, i love the rhyming, nice one

Ned Flanders April 24, 2010 at 3:51 AM Really enjoyable, you painted a very nice picture there and i do so like the last line..enjoyed a lot cheers.

Sara Kendrick April 24, 2010 at 3:41 AM Cute write...Sharing life..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara

April 24, 2010 at 2:47 AM Oh so cute. I love this so clever.