Andrea Dietrich Poet Sonnet

Hello, January

Hello, January, what a zinger
of a storm you brought with you this year, Friend!
Why can’t you just let December linger?
You know I hate vacation time to end!

I know you think you’re such a special guy,
with people counting down the seconds till
you have arrived and shooting up the sky
with fireworks, but from there, it’s all downhill!!

All those people making resolutions!
You’ve wiped the slate? All things will be like new?
To me, it seems you offer mere illusions,
and yet I keep believing in you too!

I’m begging you, don’t let this year go wrong,
and please get ALL the months to play along!!

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Phyllis Babcock March 29, 2014 at 10:33 AM Love the last two lines. Yeah been another one of those years--must be in a 7 year slump or something. Funny how some years go good and others are just the pits. love phyl

Vincent Flannery February 28, 2014 at 4:13 PM Yeah, this January was a zinger. And I didn't even make a resolution. Enjoyed this poem, just getting ready for yet another storm. Take care Andrea.

Afroze Ali January 22, 2014 at 10:49 PM Your poems are such a joy to read, Congratulations on the win!!!

Dr.Ram Mehta January 21, 2014 at 8:32 AM Enjoyed your expressions on January and congrats on the win, Andrea

Archana Garg January 21, 2014 at 3:50 AM "you offer mere illusions, and yet I keep believing in you"---- well said, I too feel like that.. :)) Archana Garg January 21, 2014 at 3:50 AM oops I forgot to say congrats.........

Anne-Lise Andresen January 20, 2014 at 2:48 PM - Hello January, contest is judged / / Sponsored by: Vicky Tsiluma - Congratulations on your winning poem, Andrea. - Nice to take part - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May January 20, 2014 at 12:18 PM Great write and win Andrea....congrats

Vicky Tsiluma January 20, 2014 at 9:36 AM Beautifully done Andrea! I like the kind of irony in the term friend as the JAnuary you describe doesn't seem to be very welcome as it brings with it the storm. Many resolutions are made and many are broken each January - you've said it very well.

Trevor Mcleod January 20, 2014 at 1:49 AM Great ideas Andrea. I especially like the part "Get all the months to play along".

Mohammad Abedin January 19, 2014 at 4:36 PM A nice poem

Tim Smith January 19, 2014 at 11:16 AM Well put...We all have high expectations going into the new year

Joseph May January 16, 2014 at 10:05 PM I like this one Andrea..I like the line about illusion and the ending couplet...hugs

Daver Austin January 16, 2014 at 6:17 PM So you got hit too. Bummer! Getting the roads safe to drive, Michigan could use all the salt in the Great Salt Lake, eh. Good for the roads though. They are smooth because all the pot holes are filled up with auto parts. Harr, harr, harr. Love, daver

Richard Lamoureux January 16, 2014 at 5:55 PM We can only hope! Is this for a contest? if so I think it will be well recieved.

Jack Horne January 16, 2014 at 4:15 PM lol, love this witty sonnet, Andrea

Saanvi Dua January 16, 2014 at 9:33 AM Love this poem !! Added it to my favourites ! Yes , 2013 passed by sooo....fast ! I hope all the months play along ( and I know they will ) ! Love and smiles , Saanvi :) ....

John Loving Iii January 15, 2014 at 1:40 PM Oh Andrea my January is all suited up to. We had that storm. I couldn't wait for the kids to go back to school. Still cleaning up messes. But as bad as it was I'm glad that another souper knows my pain.

Juliet Ligon January 14, 2014 at 11:22 PM Kind of a depressing month, isn't it? Well put together, Andrea.

Honestly J.T. January 14, 2014 at 9:28 PM Nicely done

David Fisher January 14, 2014 at 9:14 PM Great fun description of this so difficult month. I like how you have January being, hopefully, a good leader in follow the leader.

Jack Jordan January 14, 2014 at 6:01 PM I've wondered the same myself; what's so great about January? Lots of excitement and fireworks, then everyone goes back to everyday life. Nicely done... Jack Andrea Dietrich January 14, 2014 at 6:43 PM yes, you can see how much I dislike this silly month!!!

Joe Maverick January 14, 2014 at 4:24 PM Love the sentiment here Andrea, great one to read today..'

Linda Jackson January 14, 2014 at 3:05 PM HI Andrea, Yes it is January and the expectations for the new year can be too much. We all hope things go well for the new year but realistically life has its ups and downs. Very best wishes and Happy New Year, Linda xx

Painted Hunter January 14, 2014 at 2:37 PM HAHAHA...good one. The streets will be paved with morning joggers ...for two days.

Monterey Sirak January 14, 2014 at 7:36 AM Nice thoughts. I hope January listens to you.

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