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Hello, I'M Nessie From Loch Ness

Well this is my story from way back you'll probably have heard about me there's been quite a few sightings over the years people wonder what they see Many books have been written so many opinions if I'm real or not for I'm what I am no matter what despite everything I've never been caught I've watched it all from down under in the waters of Loch Ness, I've seen filmmakers have come here hoping to catch me, they're so keen So down in the depths of the Loch there I've been for so very long no living body has lived long as me outlived you all so very strong Now that I've written this piece sent up from the dark and deep I bet you are starting to wonder when does Nessie ever go to sleep? So have I convinced you? that I'm really one to fear lurking in your mind's eye or like mud not at all clear!

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Jim Slaughter

Date: 10/27/2022 2:23:00 PM

Well, Gordon, Nessie may, or may not, exist, but I like to think that he/she is a benevolent creature and that poets and other writers will continue to find him/her inspirational for years to come.

Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 10/27/2022 4:54:00 PM

Thanks Jim, Indeed I endorse all you say that Nessie has left much inspiration and ammunition to pen much about this creature whether was real or someone's fantasy. Regards, Gordon

Speaks Volumes

Date: 10/2/2022 12:38:00 AM

Oh yes Nessie, Gordon had scribed your message well, it's clear as mud that in Loch Ness you dwell. Loved the poem. Cheers from Australia.

Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 10/2/2022 6:36:00 AM

Thanks Wendy, Glad you enjoyed this one and many regards from Scotland, Gordon

Elizabeth Mccann

Date: 9/16/2022 11:28:00 PM

I'm very late finding this one, Gordon, but It is so clever and with a bit of insight, too. Well done! Elizabeth

Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 9/17/2022 3:44:00 AM

Thanks Elizabeth, Glad you enjoyed this piece and thought it a clever piece. So glad that you have dropped in my way, it's a lovely sunny day over here in Scotland. B Blessings always,Gordon

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 8/19/2022 8:00:00 AM

Gordon, i love this poem your poetic talent is so evident - I am gong to fave this poem about Nessie, she is famous, people will come looking for you to tell them your story and you will become as famous you see, as Nessie! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 8/19/2022 8:09:00 AM

Thanks Jennifer, Glad you love this piece about Nessie and made it a fave of yours. Regarding being as famous as Nessie, she's been here a lot longer than me and she can swim too!! Hugs and blessings, Gordon

Michael Tor

Date: 8/16/2022 11:30:00 AM

I live near Lake Champlain Gordon and we have a Lake Champlain monster like Nessie. Love your Poetry on Nessie, Gordon...

Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 8/16/2022 1:26:00 PM

Thanks Michael, Glad you loved this piece and has your monster been seen in hard evidence? Blessings, Gordon

Emilia James

Date: 8/8/2022 1:51:00 PM

Nessie is very good and not being found. Enjoyed your poem Gordon. Emilia : )

Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 8/8/2022 2:02:00 PM

Thanks Emilia, Glad you enjoyed this piece, hope you're having a lovely day, blessings,Gordon