Hello, Goodbye

my days are so bland
wake up! goodnight
her menacing voice spits
what do you want
how could i guess?
confusion fills my world
happiness comes and goes
like seasons
sharpness in tones
hate in your attitude
take your time,
say what you want
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Williams Avatar
February 25, 2013 at 12:01 PM
Bridget I like the poem but if I could say check you have the correct form, good poem though...David
Komala Avatar
February 24, 2013 at 11:25 PM
so true that happiness comes and goes,,,wishing you all the best dearest friend bridget <3 thak you for sharing <3 Sk
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