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Hello God

by Michael J. Falotico


                                   my eyes are spinning
                             gliding through a path of stars 
                                    bye world, hello God



~Haiku and Beyond contest~

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Judy Konos

April 8, 2011 at 5:21 PM

KQQL

Wilma Neels

March 27, 2011 at 1:12 PM

Well it was worth a try hey lol

Wilma Neels

March 27, 2011 at 12:27 PM

One of your gems I almost missed.. hmmm so tell me what were you wondering about? lol enjoyed this a lot tonight.. love Wilma

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

March 25, 2011 at 8:27 AM

what a very inspiring piece, Michael :) sure made me smile :) I really like that last line -- heehee I think we were both commenting at each other's poems roughly at the same time?? hugs your way :)

C.C Bloomsfield

March 25, 2011 at 5:42 AM

you gave me a big smile,lovely ,creative haiku :)and beyond,alwaysC.C

Andrea Dietrich

March 25, 2011 at 12:17 AM

ANOTHER good one. I am so glad this is not MY contest to judge. You did awesome.

Gwendolen Song

March 24, 2011 at 8:03 PM

Nice interjection of a head injurty. Clever and fun. Smelling salts, anyone? You will do great! Gwendolen

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

March 24, 2011 at 7:36 PM

Superb words to describe the photo for Rick's contest Michael... amazing last line luv.. should win u top spot for sure .. quality write with wonderful essence ..as only my White Knight can write .. your Jersey Girl in freezing mode ..snow gone but oh so cold for this "Sweetheart"... ready for hot beach...