Hello Darkness My Old Friend

Hello Darkness My Old Enemy 
 Take some time to collect your thoughts inside
 The playing field is rough yet we have nothing to hide
 Shallow promises made in the dark have come to light
 With regard to mental illness we all struggle with the issue
 Perhaps we haven't bitten far off then we could chew
 A picture says a thousand words as if you haven't heard
 The sign post up ahead read stop yet we kept going
 It's not based in the know but in the doing that matters
 We celebrate in little places based upon a silent hill
 For some it's cheap thrills in the back of their car
 A flood of tears pierce the skin where to begin again
 The challenge to be set free is only a question of time
 Hello darkness my old enemy go to hell where you belong
 Some ay whisper your name in a song but it won't be long
 Having long hanging fangs that bite in the night to fright
 A black crow looks intently in garbage cans for some bread
 Your face full of dread it's the walking dead among us feeling sick
 When Satan is knocking at your hearts door have Jesus open the other side
 We build fences to honor our material treasures yet soon will discover
 The fight to heaven's shore depends on a heart that's true & pure
 It's the battle that we uphold no you will do as you are told
 To bask in the vast array of a rainbow hidden in the dark

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 12/11/2016 9:10:00 AM
Very deep. I love the title and the ending. Fantastic :)
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