Notes About The Poem

Painting by: Vjckie Thayer

Hello Darkness, My Old Friend

My pain, 

Hides among, 

Beautiful darkness,

Betwixt cracks, 

In my smile,

Tears,

Sometimes,  

Fill those cracks,  

And drown the pain,

For awhile,

My old friend,

I call you,

Out again,

Hoping,

You'll never,

Learn to swim,

In pools,

Of...Silence.

(Vickie Thayer) 2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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September 11, 2018 at 6:39 AM
I love that version of the song, it is so powerful... Deep poem also, depression is a very difficult thing..
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September 11, 2018 at 12:57 PM
Yes It Is...Take Care.
Jordan Avatar
September 10, 2018 at 4:02 PM
Vickie, I really enjoyed this. I felt the silence overcome by the pain and passion. Very nice write! Thank you for sharing!!!
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September 10, 2018 at 5:19 PM
Thank You, Gabrielle. I'm Glad You Enjoyed It.
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