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Hello Beautiful Ice Float

Hello beautiful ice float You remind me of a double scoop From the Dairy Queen I wonder if there is a waffle cone Under the water Hello gorgeous ice float I wonder if you are the one Who took down the Titanic And drowned people who did not have a chance I wonder if the band is still playing Under the water

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 11/15/2023 10:45:00 AM

Hello Caren, Wow! Your imagination was really helping you to create this poem. My fav. Hugs. /Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/16/2023 10:45:00 AM

Hello Caren, All snhips should have enough lifeboats for everyone. Becausae If they do not have enough boats they are not really ready to sakil. Hugs. /Darlene/

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 11/16/2023 4:24:00 AM

I am gaga about the Titanic, and the fact that they did not have enough life boats "on purpose" for reasons of insanity.