Notes About The Poem

- Hello August -

Summer sun minutes are counted

                          Nature clears space for autumn

                          Man recognizes the colors

                          From green to barn red and gold

                         - fresh impressions and experience

                          Everything will soon be repainted

                          I hear you shout my name ...

                          the eardrum is temporarily closed

                          - not quite ready for fall yet





                           17/08/2021
                           Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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Y. Avatar
August 26, 2021 at 11:16 AM
Hi Anne-Lise, You have penned such a lovely tribute piece to August. Well done:-) Alexis
Proxenos Avatar
August 20, 2021 at 12:16 PM
Hi Sunshine Smile, my dear friend, Contrary to Europe and America and many other countries, South Africa, as its line of latitude gives away, is entering Summer and August for us is a month of gusty winds and erratic weather, one day hot, the other cold. Had a cold Winter which for us here is unheard of -7 degrees C. Summer is when plants peep out and blossoms surround us, my ears open to the popping of an oncoming Spring, you wrote a great poem Sunshine Smile. Hugs and blessings Jennifer.
Andresen Avatar
August 20, 2021 at 12:26 PM
- Summer is short in Norway, dear Jenny ... 20 c + is rare ... a lot of rain and a lot of wind - August can offer autumn ... (even if it is a little early) - This spring and summer went way too fast because of mine hospital stay ... and too much pain - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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August 19, 2021 at 10:51 AM
Lovely way of putting it... "the eardrum is temporarily closed"... Time, her steps appear to be slow when we face new experiences and fast when we face familiar ones... such is the magic of the flow of time..Enjoyed reading dear Anne... Hugs.. ~ Ani
Andresen Avatar
August 20, 2021 at 10:46 AM
- Many thanks for your comments, dear friend Ani :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Neumann Avatar
August 19, 2021 at 1:32 AM
Beautiful call of the seasons. Kind wishes, Kai
Andresen Avatar
August 20, 2021 at 10:46 AM
- Kai, many thanks for your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Kannan Avatar
August 19, 2021 at 12:21 AM
Beautiful write on autumn... The eardrum is temporarily closed, ha ha ha, I understand what you mean... Lovely, Annne...
Andresen Avatar
August 20, 2021 at 10:46 AM
- Many thanks for your comments, Supraja :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gentile Avatar
August 18, 2021 at 12:10 PM
Your beautiful expression of the changing seasons captures exactly how I feel (which is why I moved to Florida!) I loved it xxoo
Andresen Avatar
August 20, 2021 at 10:45 AM
- Many thanks for your comments, Mike :) - Florida ... sounds heavenly :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Sands Avatar
August 18, 2021 at 4:16 AM
Time goes so fast. We must enjoy each moment as we can. Beautiful poem :)
Andresen Avatar
August 20, 2021 at 10:44 AM
- Many thanks Heidi, for your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Mcintosh Avatar
August 18, 2021 at 2:02 AM
I love fall so much. It is so gentle and appeals to my spirit. I love it and your write. God bless you always, Love, Gina
Andresen Avatar
August 20, 2021 at 10:44 AM
- Many thanks for your comments, Gina :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Kauffman Avatar
August 18, 2021 at 12:31 AM
So lovely - so many creatively unique lines Anne-Lise. I'm in the same boat as you - not ready to let go of summer's hand yet I know she will soon slip away into autumn. Thi s write has a pensive air about it. Well done!
Andresen Avatar
August 20, 2021 at 10:43 AM
- Sam, many thanks for your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Skelly Avatar
August 17, 2021 at 11:13 PM
Dear Lise-Anne, we have started the seasonal countdown. Autumn is on the horizon and will inspire poetic thoughts...Looking forward to air that is cool and crisp breezes...Delice
Andresen Avatar
August 20, 2021 at 10:43 AM
- Many thanks for your comments, Delice :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Buehler Avatar
August 17, 2021 at 5:13 PM
Your tribute to August expresses well the reluctance of letting go of the glorious last days of summer. Lovely writing, Anne-Lise. Hugs, Evelyn :)
Andresen Avatar
August 20, 2021 at 10:43 AM
- Many thanks Evelyn, for your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 17, 2021 at 3:44 PM
Hello Sunshine smile No i am not ready for Fall yet. In fact i want summer to last longer. Hugs.
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 20, 2021 at 11:54 AM
Hello Sunshine Smile, yu are so welcome. Hugs.
Andresen Avatar
August 20, 2021 at 10:42 AM
- Many thanks for your comments, Darlene :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Rose  Avatar
August 17, 2021 at 2:32 PM
What an original poem about August, I feel like you, not quite ready, still those autumn colors are not far behind , thank you for gracing my mind today Smile !
Andresen Avatar
August 20, 2021 at 10:42 AM
- Vie Rose, many thanks for your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Green Avatar
August 17, 2021 at 1:28 PM
August will be over before we know it and I for one will miss the summer heat. But I will enjoy the fall colours. : ) Nicely done my friend.
Andresen Avatar
August 20, 2021 at 10:41 AM
- Many thanks for your comments, Chris :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Goldsmith Avatar
August 17, 2021 at 8:44 AM
A beautiful summer write and picture. I love the fall and the cooler weather. Have a great/blessed day....................
Andresen Avatar
August 20, 2021 at 10:41 AM
- Many thanks for your comments, Paula :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Adams Avatar
August 17, 2021 at 7:55 AM
love this... i am not ready for fall either, i love my summers... stores already have fall decorations in, pumpkin spice and the convenience stores... as for me, let me enjoy my beaches and flowers a bit longer... good one my friend! hugs
Andresen Avatar
August 20, 2021 at 10:41 AM
- Many thanks for your comments, Sandra :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Poet Avatar
August 17, 2021 at 7:02 AM
Anne-Lise, you've written a stunning tribute to August, adorned with the lovely vivid colors you've conjured. It has been a real joy to read and witness such beautiful poems and landscape Anne-Lise. Deepest regards and warmest hugs
Andresen Avatar
August 20, 2021 at 10:40 AM
- Many thanks for your comments, Las :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Daniel Avatar
August 17, 2021 at 6:24 AM
Yeah, August's beauty awaits:) lovely poem, Anne-lise:)
Andresen Avatar
August 20, 2021 at 10:40 AM
- Many thanks for your comments, Jo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Buhagiar Avatar
August 17, 2021 at 6:03 AM
A Norwegian view of summer's end. Wish mine will end too. It is too hot her. Hugs. xx
Andresen Avatar
August 20, 2021 at 10:40 AM
- Many thanks for your comments ... summer is short in Norway, Victor :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pandit Avatar
August 17, 2021 at 5:52 AM
Lovely ode to August in its wonderful bright colors you evoked, Anne-Lise. You are right--fall has to wait a while.
Andresen Avatar
August 20, 2021 at 10:39 AM
- Vijay, many thanks for your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
May Avatar
August 17, 2021 at 5:45 AM
Holding on to those last rays, Nicely penned Anne..hugs
Andresen Avatar
August 20, 2021 at 10:38 AM
- Many thanks for your comments, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Lindley Avatar
August 17, 2021 at 4:44 AM
Such a bright wonderful new creation to go with that beautiful picture. A true pleasure to read and to see such inspiring verse and scenery my friend. A definite fav....God bless,,,
Andresen Avatar
August 20, 2021 at 10:38 AM
- Many thanks for your comments and fave, Robert :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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