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My reaper came calling at twenty to seven And now I stand here in what might just be heaven The passage before me so long and so bright And voices that whisper, ‘come into the light’ I pondered my life and it’s most standout features I’m glad I was loving to most of God’s creatures I even had fondness for spiders and bats But brought a swift ending to gnats, moles and rats I vaguely recall that I passed through a gate Where questions were asked of ‘before I was late’ I think old Saint Pete found me awkward and surly When I asked him why his gate isn’t all pearly I asked if it’s true that I’ll meet former loves And be flown on the wings of two perfect white doves To take me to family, friends, dogs and cats I repented my treatment of gnats, moles and rats Two crows then flew into the light with a squark If I was to follow then I’d have to walk But I longed to meet old familiar faces So into the light, my first faltering paces My welcome committee stood dark ’gainst the light I yearn to see many I once held so tight I long to see family, friends, dogs and cats But find myself glared at by gnats, moles and rats

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Date: 7/14/2022 1:56:00 PM
Do you use a mallet by any chance lol. Tom
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Terry Flood
Date: 7/14/2022 2:39:00 PM
I hate to say it, Tom, but this year the traps ain’t cutting it, so swap ‘mallet’ for ‘big stick’ and you’re on the money. It’s horrible but needs must. Terry
Date: 7/13/2022 5:12:00 PM
Terry, this is such a fine write, a fun write, I'm sure. I feel like I'll encounter the same fate, for I have not been nice to "gnats, moles and rats." Neither have I cuddled with mosquitoes!
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Terry Flood
Date: 7/14/2022 2:42:00 PM
If it bites you, infects you or digs up your lawn… it’s gotta go! If the big man upstairs has ever had resident moles, I think he’ll understand. ;-)
Date: 7/13/2022 1:09:00 PM
'Cuz a creature's a creature, no matter how small, Especially the ones you took out with a maul.
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 7/13/2022 3:35:00 PM
My nemesis last year was a groundhog. Check out 'No Eden Here' when you're bored sometime. You might relate :-)
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Terry Flood
Date: 7/13/2022 3:29:00 PM
Thanks, Jeff. I live in a rural area and have a constant battle with moles and rats… but this years been a nightmare… they seem to know exactly what the traps are for (even the humane ones). But I only have one word to say regarding gnats… SPLAT!

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