Hello

Will you come back for me girl?
search for me to see and read my 
every word?
Will you pack up everything and go? 
And leave behind my body,mind and 
soul?
Your work is done i am told,
And leave me here all by myself 
alone,
Will you miss me dearly,I'll never 
know,
If you never return back for me and 
said 'Hello' !

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 9/9/2013 3:18:00 PM
Interesting work..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for your visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 8/28/2013 5:00:00 PM
Very sweet and touching poem, Danesh. I can really relate to you as well! Thank you so much for the kind comments. You have become a favorite poet of mine, as well.... Just curious, where are you from?
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Danesh Morgan
Date: 8/28/2013 6:08:00 PM
soup mail to you now
Date: 8/1/2013 11:19:00 PM
It is a wonderful poem... congrats! ... LOVE ~SKAT~
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Danesh Morgan
Date: 8/3/2013 9:51:00 AM
thank you so much Skat
Date: 7/30/2013 8:37:00 AM
Danesh,,,, , congratulations... with your sweet win... luv.. Linda
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Danesh Morgan
Date: 7/31/2013 1:35:00 AM
thank you Linda, you are too kind, to put me between great poets, which i am not worthy of. thank you so much and more. . . .
Date: 7/26/2013 5:57:00 PM
Hello Danesh, hope your question and heart are answered... thank you for the many comments on my poems... SKAT
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Danesh Morgan
Date: 7/27/2013 7:04:00 PM
Dear Skat, I have not found the love of my life yet. So this is my way of expressing until the gal of my eyes will appear and claim what's hers. . . . is she here?
Date: 7/25/2013 7:10:00 PM
Lovely write sport,nice to see you're up and running with the inspiration.
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Danesh Morgan
Date: 7/25/2013 11:20:00 PM
thank you M. M thou i get my msgs mixed up and i forget, to rate poems of others lols, but it is so much fun !
Date: 7/25/2013 4:26:00 AM
- Thank you for your beautiful poem Danesh, it was pleasant to read. - Well done! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Danesh Morgan
Date: 7/25/2013 11:17:00 PM
many a thanks, does not matter one or ten, coz you are a sweet friend, who stick to the very end! Need i say more. . . . ? thank you
Date: 7/24/2013 10:21:00 AM
welcome aboard, danish... your piece pulls me in with poignant images of leaving... thanks for your visit.: )huggs
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Danesh Morgan
Date: 7/24/2013 8:08:00 PM
I am blessed, to be noticed, by the best, of the best poets. thank you
Date: 7/24/2013 10:00:00 AM
Lovely words woven together danish...always enjoy your poetry onelove my friend:0)x your cherrybunny
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Danesh Morgan
Date: 7/24/2013 8:10:00 PM
always a pleasure, to have you a board, you are a treasure, for one and all. tank you
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