Hello

Will you come back for me girl?
search for me to see and read my 
every word?
Will you pack up everything and go? 
And leave behind my body,mind and 
soul?
Your work is done i am told,
And leave me here all by myself 
alone,
Will you miss me dearly,I'll never 
know,
If you never return back for me and 
said 'Hello' !
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Kendrick Avatar
September 9, 2013 at 3:18 PM
Interesting work..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for your visit to my page..Sara
Deschler Avatar
August 28, 2013 at 5:00 PM
Very sweet and touching poem, Danesh. I can really relate to you as well! Thank you so much for the kind comments. You have become a favorite poet of mine, as well.... Just curious, where are you from?
Morgan Avatar
August 28, 2013 at 6:08 PM
soup mail to you now
A  Avatar
August 1, 2013 at 11:19 PM
It is a wonderful poem... congrats! ... LOVE ~SKAT~
Morgan Avatar
August 3, 2013 at 9:51 AM
thank you so much Skat
A   Avatar
July 30, 2013 at 8:37 AM
Danesh,,,, , congratulations... with your sweet win... luv.. Linda
Morgan Avatar
July 31, 2013 at 1:35 AM
thank you Linda, you are too kind, to put me between great poets, which i am not worthy of. thank you so much and more. . . .
A  Avatar
July 26, 2013 at 5:57 PM
Hello Danesh, hope your question and heart are answered... thank you for the many comments on my poems... SKAT
Morgan Avatar
July 27, 2013 at 7:04 PM
Dear Skat, I have not found the love of my life yet. So this is my way of expressing until the gal of my eyes will appear and claim what's hers. . . . is she here?
Mohammed Avatar
July 25, 2013 at 7:10 PM
Lovely write sport,nice to see you're up and running with the inspiration.
Morgan Avatar
July 25, 2013 at 11:20 PM
thank you M. M thou i get my msgs mixed up and i forget, to rate poems of others lols, but it is so much fun !
Andresen Avatar
July 25, 2013 at 4:26 AM
- Thank you for your beautiful poem Danesh, it was pleasant to read. - Well done! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Morgan Avatar
July 25, 2013 at 11:17 PM
many a thanks, does not matter one or ten, coz you are a sweet friend, who stick to the very end! Need i say more. . . . ? thank you
Onclaud Avatar
July 24, 2013 at 10:21 AM
welcome aboard, danish... your piece pulls me in with poignant images of leaving... thanks for your visit.: )huggs
Morgan Avatar
July 24, 2013 at 8:08 PM
I am blessed, to be noticed, by the best, of the best poets. thank you
Thomas Avatar
July 24, 2013 at 10:00 AM
Lovely words woven together danish...always enjoy your poetry onelove my friend:0)x your cherrybunny
Morgan Avatar
July 24, 2013 at 8:10 PM
always a pleasure, to have you a board, you are a treasure, for one and all. tank you
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