Hello

'Hello ~ is it me you’re looking for' To me these words my love would sing when on my doorbell he would ring Oh such a glorious greeting after many years together With the endless love we had There would never be another He truly was my one and only My darling penny lover Whilst running with the night We were dancing on the ceiling As iconic Lionel sang our songs Together dancing all night long What I would give to hear once more my lover’s voice come through my door Gently singing ~ 'Hello ~ is it me you’re looking for'.... Written 14th January 2019 Competition: Hello Sponsor: Silent One 2nd Place Such sweet memories I will cherish forever as we danced together to the romantic, evocative, and unforgettable lyrics of Lionel Ritchie... Contest Strand Pick A Sponsor Brian Strand 1st PLACE

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Gideon Idudje

Date: 4/29/2020 5:35:00 PM

Tantalising Beautiful I caress

Ann Gilmour
Date: 4/29/2020 5:45:00 PM

Gideon, how kind of you to comment with such wonderful words. Thank you. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Line Gauthier

Date: 4/20/2020 1:16:00 AM

OMG Ann, this is absolutely divine. Congrats on your top win with this breathtaking piece.

Ann Gilmour
Date: 4/20/2020 2:30:00 PM

Oh I am so delighted you enjoyed it Line, I enjoyed writing it, as we were both fans of Lionel and saw him in London many moons ago now. Thanks Line. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Brenda Chiri

Date: 4/17/2020 2:05:00 AM

Ann beautiful win my friend!;)

Ann Gilmour
Date: 4/17/2020 6:05:00 AM

Thank you so much dear Brenda I always appreciate your comments my friend. Keep well. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/20/2019 1:37:00 PM

- Hello, Ann :) - Congratulations on your winning poem - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ann Gilmour
Date: 1/21/2019 3:28:00 PM

Thanking you for your congrats and hugs Anne-Lise. Sending kindest thoughts from Annxx

Eve Roper

Date: 1/20/2019 1:04:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Ann, on Silent One's "Hello" contest! Hugs Eve ~`*

Ann Gilmour
Date: 1/21/2019 3:26:00 PM

Many thanks Eve for your congrats and hugs, with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Silent One

Date: 1/20/2019 7:11:00 AM

I love that song, I used to use it for my answering machine on my mobile phone..Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Ann Gilmour
Date: 1/20/2019 7:19:00 AM

Yes it really is one of his best. Many thanks for my placement in your contest Silent One. Kindest thoughts Ann xx

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 1/14/2019 8:36:00 AM

Love this part so much Ann: "we were dancing on the ceiling as iconic Lionel sang our song together dancing all night long" There is an angel in heaven loving this whole poem as much as he can.

Ann Gilmour
Date: 1/14/2019 10:20:00 AM

Thank you Caren, your wonderful comments always hit the right spot! Kindest thoughts Ann xx

Heidi Sands

Date: 1/14/2019 4:03:00 AM

Sweet and loving Ann :) Good luck in the contest :)

Ann Gilmour
Date: 1/14/2019 4:09:00 AM

Thank you Heidi, writing this poem so many memories came flooding back... Kindest thoughts Ann xx