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Hell Today

In my head I make my life Hell the silent stabs of doubt pierce my soul the cold lonely thoughts embark heavy on my shoulders head down shoulders shrugged heavy heart my hell my cell my life I create in my head no one allowed in to witness my hell

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 8/4/2017 7:33:00 PM
It was Hell reading it but makes for the confusion which is epic.
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Date: 7/20/2017 10:17:00 AM
Inner hell indeed. Fantastic pen.
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Sally Zaragoza
Date: 8/5/2017 5:49:00 PM
Thank you, appreciate the comment very much.
Date: 7/20/2017 5:20:00 AM
Deep and dark write.. I hope your can find peace of mind.. well written Sally..
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Sally Zaragoza
Date: 8/5/2017 5:48:00 PM
Thank you, first poem so I went to a place that I sometime deal with when I'm not at my best.

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