Get Your Premium Membership

Hell, Or Betrayal

It hurts like hell when you endure betrayal! I gave my heart, my soul and all of me to you, but you failed, because of betrayal. When we first met i should of let you go, off the rip you failed because of betrayal...How can you say you love me, when you cheat on me, lie to me and come back to me knowing you failed because of betrayal? I love you and miss you so much, but you failed us, because of betrayal. You haven't even been gone a month, you gave my love away to someone you didn't even know, lied to me, cheated on me, laughed about it while all alone i knew you failed because of betrayal...I love you and i want you home, do i really knowing you failed? You can go to hell, because of your betrayal....2013.....

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 6/27/2013 10:42:00 PM
Vivian... ... enjoyed dropping by :-) -WELCOME to poetry soup. I’m here to invite you on over to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side. Hopefully you find this place to be the comfort zone your pen is looking for. If you ever need or seek feedback on a certain poem, click on my name any time you like. I’m looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend Linda"
Login to Reply
Date: 6/27/2013 6:51:00 AM
nice write up
Login to Reply
Date: 6/24/2013 9:05:00 AM
Such a sad but emotive depiction of a common scenario. Well written and welcome to P/Soup
Login to Reply
Date: 6/24/2013 7:34:00 AM
Good morning Vivian, wow.. right to the point... , your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, Stopping by with a nice and sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan and "FRIEND"....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT
Login to Reply

Book: Reflection on the Important Things