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Hell of a Night

It's been a hell of a night It burns. Something not right The devil. He wants us all Cursed those blind on the floor Big bodies. They surround the entry door The only way. To enter you must submit to there authority Blasphemy. With whiskey in my hand Praying. To take the spirit in Amen. Full of rye and full of sin. Yes the moon's shadow is closing in. An empty look. In all our eyes. I feel the gin all around The room spins And lips have lies It's been a hell of a night all round. Just starting to begin Still. Something is just not right..

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Date: 11/25/2020 4:25:00 AM
Sounds dark and disturbing.. Well penned.
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Bradley Smith
Date: 11/25/2020 9:14:00 PM
Welcome to my mind haha. Thanks always for your kind words

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