Tracey Lawrence Poet Dramatic Verse

Hell In My World

I went down
Down to hell 
Down to hell 
Is were i fell 
Were i go 
To sell my soul away 
Next will be my heart 
It was broken anyway 
lonely in the darkness 
is were it struggles to breath 
helpless and destroyed 
is were you left me 
the state im in is ugly 
and that is how i feel 
used and abused 
broken in two.

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Poet Destroyer A February 5, 2016 at 2:41 PM Tracey, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. Always with LUV ** LINDA

Vera Duggan November 5, 2014 at 7:23 PM Very well written Tracey, I hope this isn't about you, very, very sad, keep these poems coming as you do have a lot of talent, take care my fellow aussie friend.............Vera........

Jiril Clemons October 14, 2014 at 7:35 PM Wow, dark, but deeply expressive piece. Tracey. I can feel the pain, and darkness. Great, honest poem. Check out some of my poems. Might find some you like. Peace.