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Hell In My World

I went down Down to hell Down to hell Is were i fell Were i go To sell my soul away Next will be my heart It was broken anyway lonely in the darkness is were it struggles to breath helpless and destroyed is were you left me the state im in is ugly and that is how i feel used and abused broken in two.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/5/2016 2:41:00 PM

Tracey, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. Always with LUV ** LINDA

Vera Duggan

Date: 11/5/2014 7:23:00 PM

Very well written Tracey, I hope this isn't about you, very, very sad, keep these poems coming as you do have a lot of talent, take care my fellow aussie friend.............Vera........

Jiril Clemons

Date: 10/14/2014 7:35:00 PM

Wow, dark, but deeply expressive piece. Tracey. I can feel the pain, and darkness. Great, honest poem. Check out some of my poems. Might find some you like. Peace.