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Hell Hath No Fury Beware

hot burning affair but he was part of a pair wife became aware ripping them off wants her share family jewels left bare By David Kavanagh

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 4/27/2021 7:33:00 PM
An unfortunate occurrence that has not stopped happening in this century.. You have written a real life experience in a very few words. Great poem David
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Date: 4/28/2021 2:07:00 AM
Heya Funom, thank you so much for looking in, your right has not stopped and probably never will, I wasn’t judging the circumstances just perhaps the consequences, cheers David
Date: 4/25/2021 9:36:00 PM
Even though it's amusing, I'm sure it wasn't easy to write this tanka, only thinking about how to hurt the despised lover would be.Have a wonderful day, dear David. Best regards, cheers // Lasaad
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Date: 4/25/2021 11:38:00 PM
Your so right Lasaad, this took a bit of figuring out, I took it apart numerous times, swapping lines and rhymes, til I was satisfied, or indeed the wife got satisfaction, cheers David
Date: 4/25/2021 3:48:00 PM
A troubling Tanka...Well done.
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Date: 4/25/2021 8:24:00 PM
Thanks Arturo, either way it’s very troubling, nobody can be sure how a woman scorned will react, cheers David
Date: 4/25/2021 2:21:00 PM
was it his crown jewels on display i wonder!! hugs Jan xx
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Date: 4/25/2021 2:25:00 PM
I’m not saying anything Jan, other than it was pretty painful to write, cheers David
Date: 4/25/2021 1:59:00 PM
Oh my, but that can happen. Ask me, I know. Funny, David!
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David Kavanagh
Date: 4/25/2021 2:03:00 PM
Ha, that and maybe a bit extra, Milton, hell to pay if you want your way, cheers David

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