Hell

"I look around me, 
Covered in blood and pus I am. 
Dead bodies lie flat on their faces, 
of people all from different races. 
My heart beats frantically in my chest, 
As I walk through the depths of Hell; unpure and unblessed. 
Darkness surrounds me like a cold, freezing blanket,
any living soul will be thankless.
I know now my position in this forsaken land, 
I'm drowning in misery as fast as a quicksand."
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Singh  Avatar
March 15, 2018 at 5:06 AM
Well imagined & well written Aaliyah! Warm welcome in poetry soup.
Ajmal Avatar
March 12, 2018 at 12:10 PM
Oh it s such a deep and beautifully written poem, that s the reason we are in this world, to earn our salvation, the devil will constantly tries to whisper in our heart, tell us to do wrong deeds but that s when the fear of God came and if we mange to stop ourselves no matter how difficult the alternative is, we ll be in heaven and the gardens of heaven will be book for us, I truly pray for you and everyone else that we all go to heaven and that God protect us from hell
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December 12, 2017 at 8:38 AM
Deep and dark first post.. Welcome to poetry soup...
Salia Avatar
December 15, 2017 at 1:12 AM
Thank you so much!
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