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"held With Care"

When sorry comes in

you touch it so carefully

then hold it to save..

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Poet Destroyer A

December 10, 2012 at 8:30 PM

Michael, wow... this image is very moving,, saying sorry takes much and meaning it is for keeps sake... :-) always~PD

Carrie Richards

October 9, 2010 at 8:36 AM

Oh.....how I love this one! So huge a thing said, in so few words. :) !!

Jo Bien

October 6, 2010 at 7:03 AM

superb! JB

James Fraser

October 5, 2010 at 2:55 PM

Tender and gentle Senyru Michael. Thank you for your ever kind words >> James

Wilma Neels

October 5, 2010 at 6:01 AM

Beautiful write Michael, sorry has a way of mending broken hearts, heal past hurts and foster love... I love this!! Hope your week is going good thus far.. love Wilma

Carol Sunshine Brown

October 4, 2010 at 10:27 AM

From what I am reading this morning it looks as if everyone found some inspiration to write this weekend. Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry with us today Michael. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

October 4, 2010 at 8:40 AM

Beautiful thoughts Michael... lovely piece my friend.. well its wasn't pretty but the GIANTS won.and that is all I care about..its a win.. luv..

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

October 3, 2010 at 7:03 PM

Interesting words, well chosen to convey your thoughts. Great Senryu! Thanks for sharing and thank you for your kind comments on my latest. Caroline.

C.C Bloomsfield

October 3, 2010 at 2:03 PM

Such a nice word to use and to save. .sorry is my second favourite word after love!tmfvs!C

Andrea Dietrich

October 3, 2010 at 12:41 PM

An interststing concept, Michael, holding on to sorry! Love seeing your senryu!

Deb Wilson

October 3, 2010 at 11:31 AM

Sorry is one of the hard ones that's for sure...enjoyed this Michael..Take care~Deb

Phyllis Babcock

October 3, 2010 at 11:28 AM

We get sorry so little that when we are actually told sorry we hang on to it and save it and hold it with care. Great write. God Bless Phyl

Francine Roberts

October 3, 2010 at 8:08 AM

nice senryu Michael, much enjoyed

Katherine Stella

October 3, 2010 at 7:21 AM

sometimes I get over carried with Im sorrys loved your play on words here my friend sad but good cause theres always's tomorrow also thanks kindly for your warm comments to my stuff keep up the great writing