Held Together

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Held together by hairspray and prayers. Knowing the quiddity could not be changed. Clothes could not zhuzh it nor putting on airs. As long as the attitude remained deranged. Attitudes make a person who they are. Just a nip here and a tuck there Life could have a different repertoire. An awesome attitude equals a billionaire.

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Valsa George

Date: 8/5/2023 9:40:00 AM

Love your second stanza ! It is attitude that diffrentiates a man. A man of right attitude is a blessing to himself and others ! Beautiful poem dear Sara !

Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/5/2023 2:15:00 PM

Why thank you, Valsa. As one person said attitude equals altitude. Sara

David Fisher

Date: 8/4/2023 5:33:00 PM

Very enjoyable poem highlighted by the real earnings of positivity!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/5/2023 3:12:00 AM

Why, thank you, David. I appreciate the visit. Sara

Kim Merryman

Date: 8/4/2023 9:18:00 AM

Sara, I love your first line! It captures your attention and draws you in to read more. I also learned two new words. Great message! Blessings, Kim M

Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/4/2023 11:44:00 AM

Glad I had the offering of two new words today, Kim. I am glad that first line caught your eye. Thanks for the uplifting review of my work. Sara