Sara Kendrick Poet Sapphic stanza

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Held Subject

After winter, springtime holds humans subject
Also, likely sometimes control response to 
Nature's language, sedulous into summer
Wildflowers blossom  


Written: April 18, 2015 

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Funom Makama April 28, 2015 at 8:53 AM Good lines and a wonderful message relayed so plainly and transparently. A def7

Eve Roper April 19, 2015 at 1:09 PM Good job on this poem,Sara, good luck in the contest. 7 : ) Eve

Jack Horne April 19, 2015 at 5:01 AM love the picture this one conjures up, my friend

Andrea Dietrich April 18, 2015 at 11:15 PM this is nice, Sara. I am not sure on some of the meter but the imagery is wonderful.

Jan Allison April 18, 2015 at 6:28 PM Beautiful imagery Sara - I am thinking of doing this contest but the trochees and dactyls confuses me - and I have seen this done so many different ways doh:-( Hugs Jan xx good luck in the contest 7 xx