Jeff Kyser Poet Monorhyme

Held In Suspense

The morning fog obscures, ironic in a sense,
as water particles are likewise in suspense;
muffling all sound, they coalesce in self-defense,
uncertain of their fate when sunshine does commence.

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An Awit: 12a:12a:12a:12a

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Paul Willason March 9, 2023 at 6:04 PM Ah Fog ! It obscures but hightens ones awareness of what is visible right before us. Like the poem...made me enter the space, felt the damp. Paul

Daniel Turner March 9, 2023 at 12:34 PM Ironic indeed! I do love it though when it forms a blanket on the mountain outside ny back door. It is so peaceful. Good one, Jeff.