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darkness,spurt,race.pound,redness,echostride.strut, tango roil. gather.burst. pent.crash,roll, run. shiver 

he strode through darkness, echoes of pounding pulsation spurt and race in
gathering redness.  His pace quickens as shapes shiver by. The tide runs back against crash of surf. Clouds roil 
above taking on color as intensity bursts and shudders. Purple green a flicker of warning followed immediately 
by a thunderous crash.  He stopped mid stride and smiled. just like that it was over. Rain washed down, 
plastering his shirt against his skin. He took off his glasses and put them in his wet pocket. The rain stopped as 
suddenly as it began. Clouds parted to reveal stars and a tender sliver of moon tipped toward a long set sun. He 
looked back to see her running barefoot  on his footsteps.  Joy pushed tears to blur his vision.They crushed 
together wordless hugging arms following hands in a tango of familiarity
He buried his face in the nape of her neck tasting the medley of rain,sweat, tears , and that perfume she loved 
to dab right where his lips were. She started to speak.
He put his hand over her mouth and held his finger to his lips.  Words were for later.
This was time for body language, in all it's soft familiar waking passion. Shivers and shudders shared in sudden 
relief. The years of togetherness danced as the fumbling tango played itself in shared rhythmic pulsation racing 
to held back 
let now last forever, then bursting like the waves at their feet. The tide ran away as they held the closeness 
together.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 11/25/2008 7:07:00 PM
Oh my goodness..This is stunning. What every woman dreams of...BG
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