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Held Adoring Beautiful

Under a blanket of stars surreal sparkling diamond crystal cupid strikes home golden arrow over oceans wavering crumbling seas kneel Light crested dove presence of an angel floating love upon your halo crowns Grace wings dance opening with a fluttering pulse skipping beats Where the spirit tango's into a pearl's sparkle unfurling wild steeds crashing salted baited breaths escape kissing the echoes of one's soul completely captivating eclipses

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Red Fiery

Date: 11/14/2017 7:14:00 AM

A very well crafted poem, Liam! You always know how to write beautiful verses like this. Excellent Pen ! Cheers ~REd~

Gary Bateman

Date: 9/14/2017 8:36:00 AM

Hello Liam Mate, Glad to see another one of your epic gems here. It's always a treat to walk through your spirited verses. Excellent Work!! Cheers and Best, Gary

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 8/18/2017 7:56:00 PM

Hi Liam!:))Wow!Wow!Wow!This is the most very beautiful romantic tender sweet passionate n' captivating love poem you've written here my dearest friend Liam.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!Another very beautiful,sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.I love it!A most very beautiful heartfelt romantic dreamy heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet! Just wonderful!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem.Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + +!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful romantic gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray alot you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^