Heedless P-L-A-N-T

Plant Not your seeds in Poor
soil. Heinous and Quagmire
loves society. Yet,
you seclude yourselves from
your very own seed that
you have planted. But, Why?!

Non compos mentis
at the time?!... Were you
Callous?!... Or maybe
Myopic?!... Even
society that

claims to be so
Erudite has
no rejoinder.
Complicity

lurks within
the poor soil.
Be Chary

when you
Make your

S-E-E-D-S!



Pace, G.
INK-U-SCRIPT

06-15-2012
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Bangalee Avatar
December 4, 2019 at 4:00 AM
penned beautifully the Diminished Hexaverse
A   Avatar
August 31, 2013 at 9:39 AM
soup mail
Thomas Avatar
August 30, 2013 at 10:33 PM
Your awesome with words ink, love this expression:)
Sanders Avatar
February 24, 2013 at 7:17 AM
Wow again your killing me!!!!!!!!!!
Bailey Avatar
September 30, 2012 at 8:36 AM
Enjoyed reading!
Wright Avatar
August 5, 2012 at 8:56 PM
So many definitions can be drawn from this masterpiece!!! Love it Ink! You are beyond a great poet :-)
Ink-U-Script Avatar
August 18, 2012 at 7:39 PM
All smiles Doreen...thank you dearly as always!!! :)
Frank Avatar
July 31, 2012 at 3:11 PM
Your words run deep! I'm loving this one.
Ink-U-Script Avatar
August 18, 2012 at 7:39 PM
Thank you dear Meera!!!
Dietrich Avatar
July 26, 2012 at 3:41 PM
a very interesting Hexaverse, my friend! thanks for your recent comment on my poem.
Ink-U-Script Avatar
August 18, 2012 at 7:38 PM
Lol..thank you Andrea
Davis Avatar
July 26, 2012 at 10:10 AM
Thanks for sharing, really enjoy reading your work.
Ink-U-Script Avatar
August 18, 2012 at 7:37 PM
Thank you beautiful!!! Hugs..muah
Shines Avatar
July 25, 2012 at 8:00 AM
nice work
Ink-U-Script Avatar
August 18, 2012 at 7:36 PM
Thank you Kenosha!!!
Spase Avatar
July 22, 2012 at 11:32 PM
It is amazing weeds can adapt to lots of conditions choking out vulnerable plant life in the kingdom and ones that are benifical to human beings. I wish there was an answer to all this. The weeds among people are the ones who want to control and rule the world. They won't share their world with the inferior and that is the way life is planted. I sure wish I could understand your interesting poem.
Ink-U-Script Avatar
August 18, 2012 at 7:35 PM
Love your comment...someone has done some research!!! Smiles
Kendrick Avatar
July 15, 2012 at 7:25 AM
Great work..Glad that I chose this one to read today..Sara
Ink-U-Script Avatar
August 18, 2012 at 7:34 PM
Thank you Sara always!!
May Avatar
July 10, 2012 at 12:07 PM
Thanks for stopping by G...always appreciated....blessings...Joseph
Ink-U-Script Avatar
August 18, 2012 at 7:33 PM
No thank you Joseph!!
Loving Iii Avatar
July 4, 2012 at 2:01 PM
congrads on your win.
Ink-U-Script Avatar
August 7, 2012 at 6:33 AM
Thanks John!!!
Susan Avatar
July 3, 2012 at 8:01 AM
congrats on your win :) I'll have to look up some words to fully understand this.
Ink-U-Script Avatar
August 7, 2012 at 6:33 AM
Thank you so kindly!! :)
Onclaud Avatar
June 27, 2012 at 1:16 AM
hi pace, got more new stuff?.. happy day and huggs! :)
Ink-U-Script Avatar
August 7, 2012 at 6:32 AM
Yes I do my dear!!! :)
May Avatar
June 25, 2012 at 12:29 PM
Congrats on your win G....blessings...Joseph
Ink-U-Script Avatar
June 25, 2012 at 12:59 PM
Thank you so much Joseph!!
Onclaud Avatar
June 24, 2012 at 9:37 PM
yeah, i knew this would win well, pace.. congrats with lots a huggs! :)
Ink-U-Script Avatar
June 25, 2012 at 12:59 PM
Thank you dearly Nette!!
Song Avatar
June 23, 2012 at 1:22 PM
I wasn't sure if I officially said CONGRATS-U-La-shunZ! Way to go, bro! Keep these soul-rendering pieces coming! Here's to a fabulous weekend! gwendolen
Ink-U-Script Avatar
June 25, 2012 at 1:00 PM
Thank you G..always..love your comments!!
Britt Avatar
June 23, 2012 at 11:07 AM
DAMN, it just hit me; I wish I could make my parents read and UNDERSTAND this HAHA but I can still take responsibility for MY actions <3
Ink-U-Script Avatar
June 25, 2012 at 1:00 PM
lol..You are spot on!!
Brown Avatar
June 23, 2012 at 8:18 AM
Congratulations on your placement in David's "Hexaverse" contest Pace. Love, Carol
Ink-U-Script Avatar
June 25, 2012 at 1:00 PM
Thank you Carol!!
Rider Avatar
June 22, 2012 at 7:50 PM
Nicely done! Congratulations on your win as well! Thank you for comments on my poem also! ~Trudy~
Ink-U-Script Avatar
June 25, 2012 at 1:01 PM
Thank you Trudy!!
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
June 22, 2012 at 6:28 PM
Congratulations on your winning spot Pace
Ink-U-Script Avatar
June 25, 2012 at 12:59 PM
Thank you Mandy!!!
Kendrick Avatar
June 22, 2012 at 3:46 PM
Congrats on your win..Sara
Ink-U-Script Avatar
June 22, 2012 at 3:53 PM
Thank you Sara!!!
Song Avatar
June 22, 2012 at 2:04 PM
Rocking the contest with this complex-icated yest deeep write! You and Yasminovah are soon going to be the heavy hitting vocabulario experts on this site! I likey this poem!
Ink-U-Script Avatar
June 22, 2012 at 3:53 PM
Lol..thank you..love your comment!!! :)
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