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Heeding Nature's Call

The sun ascends over the horizon Beckoning a fresh morn’ set to unfold Rays of sun on mountain peak emblazon Rainbow colors in the distance enfold Revealing nature’s splendor to behold Wispy clouds above the sky in the North Rolling up as white as a cotton ball The crystal blue water sways back and forth Its tranquil sound soothes one’s body and soul A most wondrous day heeding nature’s call 15 July 2017

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Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 9/5/2017 9:47:00 AM

Heeding nature's call(idiomatic uses excluded from consideration) can be the most exuberant experience."A most wondrous day heeding nature’s call" is obvious. Day stands as an excellent metaphor for life and living, especially, in this era of apathy to ecosystem and nature's backlash as a consequence.

Elaine Gonzales
Date: 9/5/2017 10:45:00 AM

Thank you Rajat. Indeed, it is an exuberant experience :-)