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Heeding Nature's Call

The sun ascends over the horizon
Beckoning a fresh morn’ set to unfold
Rays of sun on mountain peak emblazon
Rainbow colors in the distance enfold
Revealing nature’s splendor to behold

Wispy clouds above the sky in the North
Rolling up as white as a cotton ball
The crystal blue water sways back and forth
Its tranquil sound soothes one’s body and soul
A most wondrous day heeding nature’s call


15 July 2017

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Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 9/5/2017 9:47:00 AM

Heeding nature's call(idiomatic uses excluded from consideration) can be the most exuberant experience."A most wondrous day heeding nature’s call" is obvious. Day stands as an excellent metaphor for life and living, especially, in this era of apathy to ecosystem and nature's backlash as a consequence.

Elaine Gonzales
Date: 9/5/2017 10:45:00 AM

Thank you Rajat. Indeed, it is an exuberant experience :-)